Rabu, 23 Desember 2015

POEM




( LYRICS POEM )
I love you so
That's what you'll say (that's what you'll say)
You'll tell me
Baby, baby, please don't go away(don't go away)
But when I play, I never stay (I'll never stay)
To every girl that I meet, yeah
This is what I say
Run, run, runaway, runaway, baby
Before I put my spell on you
You better get, get, get away, get away, darling
'Cause everything you heard is true
Your poor little heart will end up alone
'Cause Lord knows I'm a rolling stone
So you better run, run, run away, run away, baby

Comment : I like this poem because the poem is about a long distance relationship. I love this song 
A Lone Tear Drop (CONCRETE POEM)
I
cry
a lone
teardrop.
It falls softly
onto my pillow.
A burdened heart
behind smiling eyes
liberates the aching,
diamond teardrop,
when I dream of
your soft touch.
Without you
Who am
     I?
Comment : I think this poem makes us thrilled because she asked him to others, he must be strong with what happens in life. consequences in life and make it have a long life behold.

love rule ( NARRATIVE POEM )
This is your rule forever
This is my agreement forever
You keep your distance
I keep my promise

How much i wish you could break your line
How much i wish I could across your mind
Your red rays make me weak
My sorrow flow through your sick

You save your smile for your love
I lock my heart for my life
This is you forever
This is me fore


Comment : in my opinion, this poem illustrates how the rules of long-distance love because it is not easy to have a relationship like that, I like this poem because there is a story that is implied in the same poem with the reality of my life.